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Post by Daxe on Dec 2, 2013 21:42:54 GMT
Just made a desktop with photoshop please give me some feedback (I can take it xd) The desktop
If you want me to make you something just hit me up. -Daxe |
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Post by Icarus on Dec 2, 2013 21:55:37 GMT
Going to be critical here. I don't like the font. I think Jompa's style is more nature wise and this font makes it look industrial/electric wich isn't even close too nature. Also the white lines aren't properly rasterized. The black box on the bottom makes no sense at all. it makes the bottom white line ugly. and just shoudn't be there.4 On the bottom white line where the O goes in the white line it doesn't cut in good. it overlapses the white line. wich wasn't suppose too happen (I think) The Blue color and pattern does the same as the font. The text is not in the middle. wich it should be cause it is the most important thing. wich it should be because it is the most important thing. Also don't take this personal just giving you honest feedback  hope you can do something good with it. |
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Post by Daschundman on Dec 2, 2013 22:00:15 GMT
I agree with Icarus, the white doesn't work (maybe a black or dark blue), and the text looks nice but the font style doesn't fit (It's not smooth, it looks more like a punk rock font style). Looking forward to the final product!
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Post by Daxe on Dec 2, 2013 22:04:49 GMT
Going to be critical here. I don't like the font. I think Jompa's style is more nature wise and this font makes it look industrial/electric wich isn't even close too nature. Also the white lines aren't properly rasterized. The black box on the bottom makes no sense at all. it makes the bottom white line ugly. and just shoudn't be there.4 On the bottom white line where the O goes in the white line it doesn't cut in good. it overlapses the white line. wich wasn't suppose too happen (I think) The Blue color and pattern does the same as the font. The text is not in the middle. wich it should be cause it is the most important thing. wich it should be because it is the most important thing. Also don't take this personal just giving you honest feedback hope you can do something good with it. Thank you for your feedback and I know it isn't personal Ill fix the black bar and allready fixed the color etc but changing the font will be harder since it's all just pen tooled by me and the text not being in the middle is because i cut off a part when making the screenshot. |
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Post by Brandooo on Dec 3, 2013 0:18:44 GMT
Looks good agreeing with the others, and maybe add a symbol or two?
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Post by ECPinoy on Dec 5, 2013 0:13:39 GMT
not bad, only thing is that you might need to add a little.. no.. ALOT more green just kidding but seriously, if you want us to use this background, make it, EXTRAORDINARY. Like what Jompa uses in his vids. oh don't forget the planets |
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hope you can do something good with it.
